Monday, November 28, 2005

Take me down to the paradise city .......

They are coming ...every one is getting infected even the presumably most healthy and immune one found infected .. now there are only few left and i am luckily one them ...not sure how long i can avoid this....four of my very close are gone .. they are severly infected ...now there is no chance for them atleast , another one is playing with the limits ...even though he is a big time survivor but now i think his time is close ,
Is there a place to hide or I am safe , do i need to run fast and faster so that i can stay away from this disatrous disaster or I am safe...

when i see ...
when i see ...through ...
when i see into hospital ...
i found you giggling ...
you look happy ..
but you must be feeling down ..
you are hiding your pain...
i know you need sympathy...
you need my help ...
but this disease seems infectious ..
and i dont want to fall ..
fall into illness..
get down with the deasease...
i am happy outside.. ..
am i?

15 comments:

Aman said...

What disease are you talking about ? Usko clarify kar, to tera post chamkega mujhe.

Deepak Verma said...

desease is old ...and laa-ilaaz

MAINU &*&^% da lagiya naa rog ...

Suvro Sarkar said...

dost stay away frm the disease as long as u can...but being infected also brings its share of fun...but being infected to the point of no return is somewhat boring...wat say???

Anonymous said...

I thk this time u r talking abt tht kale til wali.. m i right.. dont go with the advise frm suvro.
u need to carry tht desease wid u.
infact i should say thts not desease at all..
gud luck.. s k jain

milo said...

i dont think d desease u r talking abt is transmitted through contact or so...
u wil b down wid this fever if destiny chooses u..;-)

Deepak Verma said...

@Suvro : right what else i can say..but i talked about you i the blog .. did you get where ?
@Jain ..."haan be koshish jaari hai ...but i think my immunity is magnanimous"

@Milo :what's in there for me in destiny's atore ..ne idea...

zxcv said...

whos the fifth one? BTW i think mr verma the disease has already caought upon u, but u always had this habbit of catching infections, tragedy lies elsewhere, perhaps in ur ability to admit abt the disease and do something abt it.
this time ur coming in the open (out of the confines of the wing, thou still in a very cryptic manner) is the biggest step u have taken, lets hope u get the ability and the courage to take couple of more steps.
summing up
sardi khasi na malaria hua.....
yeh gaya yaaro isko
...............

Deepak Verma said...

@ arnav : obviously SUvro aur kaun ho sakta hai....

Suvro Sarkar said...

haan obviously me!!!
itna obvious bhi nahin hai dost...girls r too complicated for me to figure out :(

~Lord Anshul said...

hey bhagwan !!

buddhe..i didnt know..u can write so well !!

u took me to the paradise city !! :D

Deepak Verma said...

abe suvro but you are a true figher ...cudos to you ( if the spelling is rigth)

anshul ...serious or joking ...as if you are serious you are a member of a rare club with single membership

~Lord Anshul said...

ohh ohh sarcasm !!

Avinash singh said...

buddy... i love u too.. does that count????

Deepak Verma said...

@guta : Ab kya hi kahun Sir Elton ke baare mein to tumhe pata hi hai...

Anonymous said...

Hi everyone. Please pardon my ignorance. I'm trying to find an English equivalent for the word "ilaaz" (which appears in a story that I'm reading). A google search brought me here (and elsewhere).
Does it mean "cure" or "remedy"?
Is that a Hindi word?
Thanks for any help.
t.